Empty vessels
I was talking to my Gal pal, The Ali, today. He asked me whether I liked mortality – death. No, I don’t like death, I said. He meant me writing all my poems (the ones I posted on my blog) about death. So I am now wondering… whether all you people think I am a sadistic freak who fantasizes death and I so over whelmed by this phenomena that I keep on writing about it.
Well, I shall answer to you the same as I did to him. NO, I don’t like death. In fact I fear it. I know I am no saint and there are things I have done that are going to put me in the deepest pits of hell once I die. And still I keep on doing it…. But that is a poem for another day =).
When I write my poems, I write my feelings. I write if I am moved. So, NO I am not a death loving cult member, neither do I possess a fetish for death.
There were other things we talked about and I ended up concluding that my gal pal is emotionless. I was moved. This one is for you Ali.
EMPTY VESSELS
Dedicated to: My Gal Pal
Empty vessels
Make no noise
They make no sound
They will sit
They will stare
Probably grumble
Maybe frown
You may come
You may go
Either way
They just stare
But…
If you look closer,
You see a glimpse:
sensation.
Is it too vague?
Is it too weak?
Why too small?
An attempt to protect
An attempt to be invincible
Either way
They just stare
Make no noise
They make no sound
They will sit
They will stare
Probably grumble
Maybe frown
You may come
You may go
Either way
They just stare
But…
If you look closer,
You see a glimpse:
sensation.
Is it too vague?
Is it too weak?
Why too small?
An attempt to protect
An attempt to be invincible
Either way
They just stare
- Tassy ali
No offense babe… ahem… I mean pal. Love you loads.
13 Comments:
it should be imperative that I comment first...
1) thank you Tahseer.
2) I didnt mean that you loved death when I asked u the question.
3) you rock
- the emotionless, empty vessel ;)
hehe. dont know Ali well enough to comment on him emotionless-ness :d
The point being i am still waiting for that post ;) u know THAT post....about :$
Ta !!
ALI: I know i rock.. but the fact that you said it.. makes me feel that i rock more than rock. =). ok that didnt make sense... but then it is me talkin
Fanny: trust me.. emotionless is like... well he is more than emotionless.. which blog?? (A)
ok now thats too much..i am sure poor Ali aint that bad ;) Tassy u tou just suck. Go die ;)
And hey how could u forget the promise u made when u started blogging :( Katti foreva !
Cool! Foof has kattied you... FOREVER!
And Ali isn't emotionless, are you man? What would you do if dropped your camera onto road?
ooh keith dangerous territory there..i might just have to take your first born for that :D
thanks farnaz for showing some support..for that you rock a lil bit more than Tahseer *everybody brace for flying utensils*
-Not so emotionless after all, HA!
Fanny: You dont know Ali.... so i shall strike out your comment =)
Keet: i know foof... we will wub me very soon. lets do the camera thingee... what do u say?
Ali: You willnot be able to handle Keets first born...so.. drop that idea...and Fan... dont listen to her... and i rock more than her.. so there... go..
OK, the last post is just very wierd. Did anyone see that scene in American Pie 3 when Biggs tries to impress his gfs parents and has those strippers over as well (along with the guy in leather pants)... you guys might know where this is going..
Ali, if Keith drops your camera, forget the first born, cut all of em off at the source if you know what I mean.
Emptiness: the inside of keith's head ;)
Parline: i didnt see American Pie 3.. so i dont know wht u are talking about... i agree with everything else =)
OMG Pravin! Does anyone deserve that?! Tas, how could you condone that? I'm scared of you now.
Now evil Tassy is crossing the limits. She is supporting things against the source. Let us all combine our forces and bring Tassy back to her senses. First thing, everyone Katti with her.
Ok, I just noticed that what I said about Ali's camera was left kinda incomplete. So, it was supposed to be "What would you do if you dropped your camera onto the road?" Pravin brought the incompleteness to my notice (thanks), and all this time, I was wondering why the heck Ali would want my first born as compensation for breaking his camera.
Pravin: I have another definition for emptiness, remind me to tell you.
OK Keith, I'm reminding you... what's the other definition of emptiness? May the force be with all of you... Yoda signing off
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